I love time travel stories, but I’m finding that it’s pretty challenging to write one and keep all the time lines straight. When I was laying out this tale, I used several large sheets of paper with a lot of lines drawn between events happening in past and present. Then I took a step back and decided that I needed to keep things clear and simple for the purpose of good storytelling.
I’m hoping I’m striking the right balance, and it’s a good sign that you clever readers are picking up the threads.
I’ve no doubt whose funeral Might Man is attending. Hint: it ain’t Mogul’s.
Which is all the more interesting since Mogul implied that he still had a torch for the lady. Interesting way for him to show it if true. 😛
I dislike time travel stories, but you’ve done a good job keeping things clear.